Friday, January 1, 2010

Janaka
By Sita Mcguire
Maria loved animals. She had a goldfish,bunny,mouse,bird,and a ant farm! But what Maria wanted most was a puppy.
One morning after breakfast she wanted a puppy so bad that she walked straight to her mom and dad and said,''I want
a puppy so bad''. Maria's parents looked each other. They said,''okay''. Maria had a smile on her face. ''But this would be the
last pet okay''said Maria's mother and father. Maria said okay.They went to the pound and they looked. Maria saw a puppy
with dirty fur and yellow teeth and was very jumpy.''I want this one''Maria said. Maria's mother looked at the puppy Maria chose out. She told the person that worked their and they brought the puppy home. On the way home the puppy was very tired.''I will name you Janaka.''Said Maria. When the family got home,Janaka looked very thirsty. Maria put a glass
of water so he could drink. Suddenly Janaka had kicked over the glass of water. Maria's mother looked very mad.She
walked Janaka over to a cage she had bought at the pound. ''In a our I will let you out.'' after lunch time Janaka was
let out by Maria.''I'm sorry''.said Maria to her puppy Janaka.After Janaka had lunch he played ball with Maria. Once Maria
through the ball in the mud. Janaka ran to get it. He got mud all over him. And then Janaka ran in the house. He
led a path of mud in the house. Maria's mother screamed! ''Go to you room for two ours this time''! After his two ours were
over there were tons of people in the house. They were having a party. Janaka went on the couch with Maria.''Your such a naughty puppy!'' Maria went close to Janakas ear,and said,''But I love you,best of all''.


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4 comments:

  1. great story!I love it, very detailed and nice

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  2. Yes this is a great story. I think it's realistic because it shows the messes and trouble that new puppies can cause, but we can love them anyway.

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